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Started by Cocateho, July 27, 2015, 09:27:01 AM
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Cocateho
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Big sky
July 27, 2015, 09:27:01 AM
A rough sketch of an idea, supposed to be Wyoming, Montana, or the like... sky and mountains could use a little work I think. C&C welcome.
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Re: Big sky
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July 27, 2015, 10:14:45 AM
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: July 27, 2015, 02:15:18 PM by Kadri
Good start.
Have you looked at your image at a different monitor? It looks a little too bright to me.
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July 27, 2015, 02:12:21 PM
Agree with Kadri about the brightness.
Otherwise overall I like the composition and the scene. Good job!
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Re: Big sky
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July 27, 2015, 03:46:59 PM
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: July 27, 2015, 03:49:50 PM by Cocateho
Little update. It doesn't seem overly bright to me? Is it looking washed out to you guys?
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July 27, 2015, 04:57:59 PM
A bit but I think u also have too much red in the overall picture. I would remove also some red in PS or something. The sky and the mountains looks better with less red and bit more blue IMHO.
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Re: Big sky
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July 27, 2015, 06:51:40 PM
Played around with it a bit, seems an improvement to my eyes.
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Re: Big sky
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July 27, 2015, 08:12:58 PM
Small crop with some more additions...
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Re: Big sky
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July 28, 2015, 11:00:31 AM
Not sure if this is final or not, can't think of anything else to do...
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July 29, 2015, 07:41:28 PM
Looks very good!
could you try some variations with the tree turned around? I think it looks a bit strange because the two branches at the botttom of it seem to be one very thick branch.
But anyway very impressive view!
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Re: Big sky
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July 30, 2015, 02:07:50 PM
So I decided to go in an altogether different direction... Still needs refinement.
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Re: Big sky
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July 31, 2015, 01:33:02 PM
Couldn't resist the temptation to transition the seasons...
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Re: Big sky
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July 31, 2015, 05:36:46 PM
I like what where this is going. I would increase the large scale noise on the clouds more and it might look neat to add some shore sands along the stream.
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August 01, 2015, 02:45:24 PM
Oh yes! very good direction!
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August 02, 2015, 07:03:32 PM
Thanks! So I changed the trees a bit to look more like an aspen thicket and made the bank sandier.
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Re: Big sky
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August 02, 2015, 11:39:47 PM
Almost final... I think. Small version.
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