Big sky

Started by Cocateho, July 27, 2015, 09:27:01 AM

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Cocateho

A rough sketch of an idea, supposed to be Wyoming, Montana, or the like... sky and mountains could use a little work I think. C&C welcome.

Kadri

#1

Good start.
Have you looked at your image at a different monitor? It looks a little too bright to me.

archonforest

Agree with Kadri about the brightness.
Otherwise overall I like the composition and the scene. Good job!
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Cocateho

#3
Little update. It doesn't seem overly bright to me? Is it looking washed out to you guys?

archonforest

A bit but I think u also have too much red in the overall picture. I would remove also some red in PS or something. The sky and the mountains looks better with less red and bit more blue IMHO.
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Cocateho

Played around with it a bit, seems an improvement to my eyes.

Cocateho

Small crop with some more additions...

Cocateho

Not sure if this is final or not, can't think of anything else to do...

DocCharly65

Looks very good!

could you try some variations with the tree turned around? I think it looks a bit strange because the two branches at the botttom of it seem to be one very thick branch.

But anyway very impressive view!

Cocateho

So I decided to go in an altogether different direction... Still needs refinement.

Cocateho

Couldn't resist the temptation to transition the seasons...

AP

I like what where this is going. I would increase the large scale noise on the clouds more and it might look neat to add some shore sands along the stream.

DocCharly65

Oh yes! very good direction!  :)

Cocateho

Thanks! So I changed the trees a bit to look more like an aspen thicket and made the bank sandier.

Cocateho

Almost final... I think. Small version.