WIP - Fresh Air

Started by sjefen, February 20, 2019, 10:29:21 AM

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DocCharly65


D.A. Bentley (SuddenPlanet)

I like everything about the 2nd version, except I think the background mountain in the first image is better.  I would actually take the original background mountain and move it a bit higher in the composition so you can see more of the base of the mountain.  I would also try and find some subalpine fir trees for the foreground area on the sides, and maybe a few sparse subalpines in the middle scattered strategically.

Some inspiration:
https://www.timberpress.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/6-02_06a_TSNW_0816417-WEB.jpg
https://www.timberpress.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/7-02_07a_TSNW_0411425-WEB.jpg
https://imgc.artprintimages.com/img/print/subalpine-paintbrush-and-lupine-wildflowers-and-mt-rainier-at-mazama-ridge-paradise-area_u-l-q12t2z10.jpg?h=900&w=900

I really love the grasses and clouds!

-Derek