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Wild Late Afternoon (WIP)
Wild Late Afternoon (WIP)
Started by GioMez, July 02, 2008, 07:44:42 AM
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Zylot
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Re: Wild Late Afternoon
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July 03, 2008, 06:18:54 PM
This is an improvement, but everything feels so scattered...
Blonderator
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Re: Wild Late Afternoon
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July 03, 2008, 08:03:45 PM
Some of the trees you have in there (the biggest ones especially) don't fit with the other types of trees. Either lower the scale of the huge trees in the foreground, or remove them, and it would look a lot better IMO.
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Re: Wild Late Afternoon (WIP)
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July 05, 2008, 10:31:08 AM
Another one..
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Re: Wild Late Afternoon (WIP)
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July 05, 2008, 10:33:04 AM
Those clouds are cool! Though a bit dark.
I'd get rid of the bright tree, it's really distracting.
The fake stones could use some more texturing, they look very blu'ish (here).
I like the composition and how the depth is built up, good work!
Martin
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