Glendale

[mindsap]

This is a work in progress, Also this is my first render in 64 bit system.  All comments welcome. 

[Tangled-Universe]

This looks good so far.

I agree with Sjefen about the yellow parts and the GI.
I think the yellow parts is just the soil and if so, I think you should try to add some bump and color variations.
Like I said in Sjefen's image-thread I like the tree-model but the bark-textures aren't really good.
You might try these if you'd like:

http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=3693.msg38179#msg38179

If the results look good I can send you the full-res versions of the textures.
And oh yes...the grasses are very nice indeed!

Martin

[sjefen]

Yeah.... I can't see the image.

[mindsap]

How do I attach the image?

[sjefen]

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[mindsap]

Thanks sjefen, It was right there and I could not see it.

[sjefen]

I think it's nice, but I don't understand what the yellow part is. I also think a little more GI would be better.

Where did you get the grass from? It looks very good.

[mindsap]

The grass is modified from one of lightnings sets.   And thanks TU I'll  try that.  I agree you can't really makeout the middle ground, I'll work on that also.

[rcallicotte]

This is cool.  A little more randomness among the trees would be better.

[Oshyan]

It looks like reflectivity/specularity is present on the leaves which is giving them an odd blue cast on the top of some - I'd disable that or significantly reduce it. You also might want to add or increase translucency on the leaves.

- Oshyan

[inkydigit]

looks good so far, look forward to seeing the next version!