An embarrassment - (and an introduction)

Started by Renegade26, September 10, 2008, 04:45:22 PM

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Renegade26

Hi there!

New to the boards, good to meet you all.

This first pic of mine has been thorugh so many transformations you wouldn't believe but i guess it's allowed me to experiement with all of T2's features.

It was great as a 'day scene' but I got so fed up with all the tinkering I decided to set the sun a little. (I'll post the day scene if anybody wants)

Here is my first effort then:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/30418909@N06/2845982927/sizes/o/


Please check it out and give me some feedback, good or bad.

Look forward to sharing some ideas with you all.


Harv

RArcher

Hi Harv,

Always nice to see some new posters.  I think this is a great "first" image no matter how many transformations it has been through.  Here is a whole bunch of feedback to keep you going:

1. I would say that the trees are much larger than they should be.  I would suggest that you scale them down dramatically, and at the same time decrease the spacing between the trees by quite a bit.  This will help increase the visual scale of the mountains.

2. You may also want to increase the size of your population bounding box, as you can see on the right hand side that you hit the cutoff before the edge of the image.

3. Add a couple more variations to the trees.  I know that Lightning recently posted a free pine tree that would enhance this by helping the forests look a little more dynamic.

4.  The mountain shapes are very nice but the textures are screaming out for some variation in colour and tone.  Additional surface layers and powerfractals should be able to help you with this.

5.  Perhaps a little cliche but a nice partial or full moon could enhance the sky quite nicely.

Overall the image has a great mood and ambiance and I definitely hope to see what else you come up with both with this image and your future projects.

inkydigit

hello and welcome!...great first post...I echo RArcher's comments!

Renegade26

Thanks very much for your feedback guys; It was your image 'mountain storm arriving' which actually inspired me to have a go at this one!

Cheers.

Zairyn Arsyn

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Seth

good first post !
RArcher already gave good advices ;)

rcallicotte

Welcome to the forums.  RArcher was already very helpful.  Keep experimenting! 
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lightning

hey Harvey welcome!
nice first image everyone has to start somewhere ;) you should have saw my first terragen 2 picture it was awful!!!

but just remember you can only go forward and improve your skills there are a great bunch of guys here who will guide you and help you to get better and better with terragen 2 ;D