whats missing here?

Started by crosseout, October 09, 2008, 11:45:50 AM

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crosseout

I had a vision, but this just didnt reach up to it.... whats wrong, is it the light, the composition? oh well, ill try something else...

PG

Well from personal opinion I'd say the water look a bit weird and the shadow on that foreground rock looks bizarre considering the direction the light is coming from. Is there something just of the edge of the frame that's causing that shadow?
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RogueNZ

Rocks look good, i'd say the water is way to reflective/not rough enough and the sky is quite blue, and the shadows are really dark. Try focusing the camera more on the rock face in left/middle of the image. Nice effort thoguh

MacGyver

I agree, the shadow looks weird and everything else is blue... perhaps a "bonsai on the rocks" would do the trick ;)
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