Simple Sunset

Started by chefc, October 14, 2008, 07:20:06 PM

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chefc

Just a simple sunset
Thanks to dandel0 for the Starry background  ;D Great Stuff Bud
Schooner .obj from Jed @ Renderosity
Clouds and atmosphere by me
C & C or improvement's  I'm open
Chef C  ;)

Serving the masses  8)

dandelO

I like it, Carl! It's kind of like the view from my boat in my recent 'Hometime' pic but, later that evening.
I did think it was hometime but I must have found the bottle of Jack in the cabin and stayed out a little later. Howdy sailor! ;)

I'd see to the clouds I think, some of the little ones seem too lit-up, other than that, great job.

Everytime I see my nightsky background now I feel it has too many stars, this isn't your fault but mine. Dropping the colour offset(minutely) in each star fractal or, reducing the luminosity in the connected surface layers will reduce the amount of stars visible in the sky, I think I've went a bit overkill with them in the original clip I uploaded. Anyhow, chop 'em up as you wish, that's what they're for. :)

rcallicotte

Better clouds and this is mucho good.
So this is Disney World.  Can we live here?

inkydigit

super light and mood/water/model agree about the clouds....still I love this!

chefc

Thanks for the comments I was iffy on the clouds myself but I guess I was to stubborn to admit it  ;D I think I know where the problem lies so I'll attempt it again with a different structure
Again than's to dandel0,calico & inkydigit for your comments
Chef C  ;)

Serving the masses  8)

inkydigit

you're welcome...look forward to the next render!