After The Rain (WIP)

Seth · February 11, 2009, 11:42:43 AM

huhu no you're right, the clouds do need improvement ^^

rcallicotte · February 11, 2009, 12:14:29 PM

The atmosphere is excellent, the water is perfect and rocks / terrain are exceptionally realistic.

And your lighting is sensational. What do you think?

Seth · February 11, 2009, 12:55:34 PM

I think i prefer when you write critical comments

rcallicotte · February 11, 2009, 01:34:36 PM

LOL

Quote from: Seth on February 11, 2009, 12:55:34 PM
I think i prefer when you write critical comments

Seth · February 11, 2009, 04:22:04 PM

still playing...
some pw on this one though

FrankB · February 11, 2009, 04:34:16 PM

interesting... has a somewhat eerie mood, too :-)

rcallicotte · February 11, 2009, 07:16:55 PM

Okay. A comment, as you like - the clouds are perfect from the left side to about a little over the middle way and then there is something chalky looking in them. Otherwise, as I said before, this is stunning. Please don't give up, because I believe you have a top-notch image coming here.

Seth · February 11, 2009, 07:47:59 PM

thanks ! ^^
you're right about the clouds... i need to find what's wrong ^^

Mandrake · February 11, 2009, 08:18:37 PM

I like the first one better, are you starting to tweak the color? I'd like to see what you come up with when you have multiple layers of your clouds with slightly tweaked colors. I like yoour clouds!

Seth · February 11, 2009, 08:36:12 PM

multiple layers... that will be the next step... first i need clouds that fit my taste

mr-miley · February 12, 2009, 04:10:38 AM

Nice.... but I much prefer the clouds in the first version.

Miles

<<Edit>> Sorry Franck, that was not the most helpful comment I could have made

The reason I like the clouds better in the 1st one is they are less defined and less "organic" looking. They have the look of clouds that have just dropped their rain and are now moving off somewhere else (possibly to pick up some more rain

) I think their lighting and "haziness" fits much better with the rest of the scene.

Hope thats a bit more helpful

Miles

Seth · February 12, 2009, 05:45:08 AM

yeah and i must say i totally agree with you mr-miley

i much prefer the first ones too !

Mandrake · February 12, 2009, 04:46:36 PM

Quote from: Seth on February 11, 2009, 08:36:12 PM
multiple layers... that will be the next step... first i need clouds that fit my taste

Are you sure about those steps?

choronr · February 12, 2009, 10:30:41 PM

My goodness, I can almost hear the rumblings of thunder in the distance ...now that is realism. I prefer the first image. It gives the feeling of 99% humidity. Extra fine work here.