Alpine Lake (FINAL)

Started by JimB, November 16, 2009, 05:19:48 PM

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JimB

A continuation of Alpine Forest which I posted recently, but with water and a bunch of changes.

added: No more changes to be done.  ;)

added: No more changes to be done.... honest.  ;)

Thanks for looking (again and again...).



Full size here: http://i331.photobucket.com/albums/l469/jimbowers/TESTS/alpine_lake_v5_Jim_Bowers_2009.jpg
Some bits and bobs
The Galileo Fallacy, 'Argumentum ad Galileus':
"They laughed at Galileo. They're laughing at me. Therefore I am the next Galileo."

Nope. Galileo was right for the simpler reason that he was right.

FrankB

great job, Jim, just like I got used to from you  :)

I thought it was a photo, on first sight. I wonder how this would look like bigger and at higher detail.
My minor crit is on that I don't fully believe the rock color.

cheers,
Frank

RArcher

Beautiful Jim!  Maybe just a slightly lower sun position and you would start getting some pinks/yellows reflected off the snow.  Something like this:  http://www.archer-designs.com/zp/index.php?album=photography%2Fchristmas-2008&image=DSC_0014.jpg

Gannaingh

This is fantastic! I agree with Frank's comment about the color of the rock but beyond that it is pretty hard not to believe that this is a photograph.


Henry Blewer

It's really good. I'm surprised that more of the mountain is not reflected into the lake. But I would not change the POV. A lower sun angle might make the image more 'cinematic'.

EDIT: The mountain reflection: Changing the wind patch may make the reflection larger.
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JimB

Thanks everyone. I'm doing a new render tonight with that redder look Ryan pointed out, for the hell of it  ;) . It'll also have a heavier misty atmos lower down. Will post when it's ready.

I've not been too fussed on the rock surface, either. It'll be a kind of progressive piece. The grass needs 'something', as well.

Ta.
Some bits and bobs
The Galileo Fallacy, 'Argumentum ad Galileus':
"They laughed at Galileo. They're laughing at me. Therefore I am the next Galileo."

Nope. Galileo was right for the simpler reason that he was right.

Oshyan

Excellent! I find the high-altitude cirrus clouds to be a bit too "squiggly", but otherwise it's near photographic. Also perhaps a bit too much sharpness (or noise), e.g. on the vegetation or the foreground water. Perhaps a tad higher AA, or a smoother AA filter? Looking forward to future versions...

- Oshyan

moodflow

Wow, the rocks and snow on the mountain are spot on!  Not sure on the squiggly cirrus (as Oshyan stated).

Nice work for sure.
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Dune

Damn fine piece of art. I really like the contrast, but I agree with Oshyan about the cirrus. They make it kind of surreal. As you yourself stated, the grass might need some differentiation, at least for a big render.

---Dune

schmeerlap

Inspirational use of cloud layer for lighting effect, and great result. I like it.

John
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inkydigit

I like this, kind of agree about the rocks, but still, this is excellent!

JimB

Damn, everyone noticed the cirrhus. I thought the grass, rock and sharpness would have distracted you all from that  ;)

Working on it anyway.
Some bits and bobs
The Galileo Fallacy, 'Argumentum ad Galileus':
"They laughed at Galileo. They're laughing at me. Therefore I am the next Galileo."

Nope. Galileo was right for the simpler reason that he was right.

Henry Blewer

We all look forward to the next version. :)

Side Note: Smoother AA filter? I detect a hint of the future. 8)
http://flickr.com/photos/njeneb/
Forget Tuesday; It's just Monday spelled with a T