Land of the Clovers 3 Wip

[Zairyn Arsyn]

here it is, my first render with 2.1.18.1


http://-zagadka-.deviantart.com/art/land-of-the-clovers-147661627

c & c always welcome

[Kadri]

It looks plain , simple and like kind of a casual PHOTO that someone who is a good photographer has taken.

I like this render 

Kadri.

[Zairyn Arsyn]

forgot to add the Wip

i have planned more for this, it was just that it was late and i was in hurry to go to bed, plus i really wanted to see what looked like in hi-quality and hi-res.

[Malcolm79]

This work is moving in the right direction! Great scene!

[Henry Blewer]

A hero rock or one tree in the distance is all this needs.

[Zairyn Arsyn]

there will be a noble one tree & more clovers in the next render.

[rcallicotte]

More samples for clouds and sky would make this richer - more contrast in the sky.  Otherwise, it smells like a Saturday afternoon.   

[Zairyn Arsyn]

More samples for clouds and sky would make this richer - more contrast in the sky.  Otherwise, it smells like a Saturday afternoon.   

oh yeah, forgot to mention; i did that too, i increased cloud/atmosphere samples and tweaked the cloud fractal shader some.
but i wont know how it really turns out til i get home this afternoon.

[Zairyn Arsyn]

second render-

http://-zagadka-.deviantart.com/art/land-of-the-clovers-2-147799840

[Tangled-Universe]

Very nice render, reminds me of an earlier work from Saurav Subedi
Everything looks good and pretty. One minor thing is that I find the clovers distractingly big. I'd reduce them by 50% and also make the size variation a bit stronger.
Maybe an extra grass and flower species could make it look even more natural and realistic.
Splendid clouds by the way

Martin

[Henry Blewer]

It's almost perfect. The clovers are too large, TU's suggestion is right on.

[MacGyver]

BAM! Fantastic improvement, couldn't believe my eyes Yeah, I support the move to smaller (and then perhaps more?) clovers. Super lightning, bought!

[Zairyn Arsyn]

thank you huys, for the comments and suggestions, i'll get to work on the changes in a few days

[aymenk2003]

Hi ZAGAD...
the clover? aren't they that little plants that their petal don't exceed 1/4 inch..?
Otherwise , very nostalgic render ...btw try to make a render with "le VIEUX" tree in the file sharing...

N.KAID

[Zairyn Arsyn]

added walli's DNW flower, more clovers - plus its at a pov that is closer to the ground..
the next version will higher off the ground.

http://-zagadka-.deviantart.com/art/Land-of-the-Clover-3-149653375