Forgotten Forest FINAL storyboard

Started by Zairyn Arsyn, May 04, 2010, 08:04:52 AM

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Zairyn Arsyn

now see even more! :)

i'm really happy with vegetation/trees and the water!!

full res:
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/160/2/7/shallows_wide_view_by__zagadka_.png

now, back to work!
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domdib

Water looks very good, and I like the cypress roots.

Zairyn Arsyn

the water actually has some of its parameters animated (the transparency and decay distance) but its a slight change, not a big one.

i also plan on animating the clouds.
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MacGyver

I like it, although I think the blurs the details a bit too much, considering the high resolution. Would be interesting to see a sharper version. Nevertheless, add a steamboat and you got a Louisiana swamp ;)
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Zairyn Arsyn

Quote from: MacGyver on June 11, 2010, 04:50:42 AM
I like it, although I think the blurs the details a bit too much, considering the high resolution. Would be interesting to see a sharper version. Nevertheless, add a steamboat and you got a Louisiana swamp ;)
:D

the thing is, if you add a Steamboat, you would need a Mark Twain TGO to go along with it, or just Mark Twain himself.

i'll be sure and change the AA filter.
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i modeled & added a new type of pylon, i call them "forkers", there untextured right now, but they'll soon have some textures.

added rocks, from the nwda fake stones pack, they look alright in my stone testing tgd, but i cant get the texturing / coloring right in the contest tgd.  ???
also added grass, needs closer spacing.... though i tried .5 and TG2 crashed.

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Dune

QuoteNevertheless, add a steamboat and you got a Louisiana swamp

What if you extend the population of the knees, and add some (clumps of) bushes and/or long grass, towards the center of the water, as a smooth gradient from land to water. Then you'll have a real swamp feeling. Forget about the fake stones, they don't belong in a swamp. I wouldn't use the forks either, but that's my personal opinion. And perhaps reduce the size of the ivy on the big pylons, so they themselves would look bigger.

---Dune

TheBlackHole

They just issued a tornado warning and said to stay away from windows. Does that mean I can't use my computer?

Zairyn Arsyn

here is storyboard version 3
detail 0.5
AA 3

-changed the texture on the pylons (for RTS)
-changed the ivy
-added third cloud layer
-adjusted the distribution of the cypress knees
-added object for frame 6

the monument in frame 6 is currently incomplete, still modeling parts of it. 

shoud i leave the pov in frame 1 the way it is?
i was considering changing the pov slightly, lowering it a little bit, changing the pitch for a more forward view.

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Zairyn Arsyn

#85
the strange pylon monument...

this object will be seen in the last frame

its not complete, i'm still having some ideas.

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here is what lies at the head of the river...
i know the surfacing on the ground needs some work

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domdib

It certainly looks eerie - if that's the effect you're after, I'd say you achieved it.

Rudolfking

It looks good, I like the forest!
Add more detail to the ground, it's a bit flat and blurred.

Hannes