The warmth and the atmo are very emotional and remind me of real moments from the past. I think you are very close to an image that goes beyond attempting to recreate reality, to a work of art. But I have no idea what you need to do to push it the rest of the way, or what you should do to make sure you dont loose what you have as you continue. And if you don't know either, than at least you have the advantage of spontaneity, which always leaves a visible mark on a work, and thats something people like to see. This is really appropriate for what your trying to do since the moment your trying to capture always comes and goes very quickly. Maybe there is some advise here after all.