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Title: Wake (and fishing boat)
Post by: Dune on December 28, 2009, 03:52:03 AM
I wanted to figure out a way to get a wake behind a boat, while not using the painted shader. This test is the result. Not a perfect picture, but the wake kind of works. In the sunny render I don't like the 'overall foam', it's too harsh. In the sunrise render the crest foam kind of disappears, unfortunately. The waves are not perfect either, but after all, it was just about the wake.

---Dune
Title: Re: Wake (and fishing boat)
Post by: Dune on December 28, 2009, 03:52:30 AM
And the second one...
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Post by: FrankB on December 28, 2009, 05:45:25 AM
Very well done! You're excellent at TG2, as this render is showing again :)
I especially like the sunset variant. The wake is a bit too linear, do you see a way to warp it a bit?

Cheers,
Frank
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Post by: aymenk2003 on December 28, 2009, 07:15:52 AM
No Comments...Just nice renders ...Both of them are excellent...
N_KAID
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Post by: Henry Blewer on December 28, 2009, 08:02:15 AM
I think the wakes in both are very good. You always have great images to share, but these are wonders.
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Post by: Dune on December 28, 2009, 08:25:49 AM
There might be 2 ways to warp a bit. I'll see to it  ;)
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Post by: Hannes on December 28, 2009, 09:34:10 AM
That's really great! To make it more visible you could make the foam part a little bit luminous to fake the light scattering. I did that in other apps and it works fine.

Can you displace the water additionally to the foam pattern (which looks fantastic!)? That would make the water look perfect.

Imho the boat seems to be too small. It looks a little bit like a model.
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Post by: Seth on December 28, 2009, 01:51:42 PM
very good water ! lovely light ^^
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Post by: Linda McCarthy on December 28, 2009, 06:10:23 PM
Exciting renders!  Love the water in the 1st and the mood in the 2nd.  Great POV and overall composition.  Linda
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Post by: Tangled-Universe on December 28, 2009, 06:35:05 PM
I really like all this work you do on water, almost completely unexplorered terrain for me in TG2.
I'd better call you Neptune or Poseidon from now on :D
Are you going to render a new version for this? You might try to add some fome to more spots on the watersurface, since it is pretty rough everywhere.
Great foam-fractal by the way :)

Martin
Title: Re: Wake (and fishing boat)
Post by: Dune on December 29, 2009, 02:59:10 AM
Another version.
@Hannes: I got the same idea about the luminosity, it helps, but I didn't want to overdo it. The foam is displaced, but with that I didn't want to overdo that as well. After all, what you see is a rather large area, the waves are big. I'm quite happy with the boat (I wanted it to look small in comparison to the waves to show the drama of outbound fisherman, so to say. And after all: it IS a model  ;)), although I now see that the foam is going over the aft.
@TU: I put some more foam elsewhere, but it didn't come out very much (less luminosity a.o.) The foam fractal is nothing fancy, but I'll have to experiment with voronoi (someone did this already, I remember).

The problem with water (and clouds) is that the renders take so long, and I'm very impatient and want to get on to the next challenge. So I would better stick to dunes,I guess... 
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Post by: Henry Blewer on January 01, 2010, 10:25:36 AM
Fishing boat 3 is really fantastic. 8) I know what you mean about long renders. I bought a new monitor for my computer. I comes with a keyboard and mouse, so when I can buy a new computer I'll be able to get better hardware.
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Post by: Mandrake on January 01, 2010, 10:39:50 AM
My minds eye likes the scale on the last one much better. Very nice Dune!!
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Post by: TheBlackHole on January 01, 2010, 11:48:05 AM
Quote from: Hannes on December 28, 2009, 09:34:10 AM
Imho the boat seems to be too small. It looks a little bit like a model.
It is a model. Everyone knows you can't have a PROCEDURAL boat! :D
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Post by: freelancah on January 01, 2010, 01:21:00 PM
The latest one is deffinetly the best. Scale comes out well and the light is also nice. I could imagine the boat having few lightsources but placing them without wireframe view is quite painful ;P All in all, very nice work!
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Post by: Linda McCarthy on January 01, 2010, 05:40:48 PM
This latest version is exciting, though- overall, I like the 2nd best.  All are excellent, in my opinion.  Linda
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Post by: littlecannon on January 02, 2010, 06:53:05 AM
Loving the latest one. Is Clooney driving?
Simon.
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Post by: EoinArmstrong on January 02, 2010, 07:18:43 PM
Aw man - they are all awesome - you should be proud - jaw-dropping work!
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Post by: Dune on January 03, 2010, 03:32:55 AM
 ;D
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Post by: Jack on January 03, 2010, 05:11:45 AM
Quote from: TheBlackHole on January 01, 2010, 11:48:05 AM
Quote from: Hannes on December 28, 2009, 09:34:10 AM
Imho the boat seems to be too small. It looks a little bit like a model.
It is a model. Everyone knows you can't have a PROCEDURAL boat! :D

he means a remote control boat dufuss
nice pic dune i love the glare in the 3rd image and the water fractal is perfect^^
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Post by: NWsenior07 on January 03, 2010, 11:42:06 PM
This last version is even better than the first two were. Well done! the foam is particularly excellent
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Post by: Seth on January 04, 2010, 03:02:00 PM
very good job indeed !
it is a pleasure to look at your threads, dude ! ^^
Title: Re: Wake (and fishing boat)
Post by: Dune on January 05, 2010, 03:48:04 AM
Thanks guys. I do my best, and luckily have the time now, as my next commission is not due.