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Title: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: cyphyr on July 04, 2020, 07:26:46 pm
A bit late to the party this time. I couldn't get started or inspired ... strange times indeed.

Nearly there, a couple more elements to add but this is pretty much what I will be submitting.

Good luck everyone :)
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: WAS on July 04, 2020, 09:03:54 pm
That looks really nice! Though only thing I could suggest is maybe adjust the trees that are popping through the wings of the ship. Unless it was lowering down straight over them, I don't know, but it did catch my attention and I wondered how much physical branching is inside the ship.

God rays look really nice but I kinda wish I could see into the forest better.
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: Kadri on July 04, 2020, 09:13:47 pm
Looks nice. Good luck.
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: Dune on July 05, 2020, 01:14:50 am
Cool render, and nice concept. Good luck to you too.
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: mhaze on July 05, 2020, 04:53:41 am
Nice one!
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: Hetzen on July 05, 2020, 08:40:19 am
Looks really good Richard. The only thing for me is the telegraph poles scale in relation to the horse and caravan. I didn't notice the tree sticking through the ship model.

Good luck.
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: cyphyr on July 05, 2020, 10:52:17 am
Yeah the poles are gone now and I have swapped out the ship and a few other refinements.
Rendering a 1080p now and I'll try for a higher res if time allows.
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: j meyer on July 05, 2020, 12:05:23 pm
Nice image and good luck.
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: WAS on July 05, 2020, 02:17:21 pm
Poles look like the right height, just kinda really skinny. Depth seems weird across the street with the caravan and horse.

Can't wait to see the new version.
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: Jo Kariboo on July 05, 2020, 05:52:35 pm
There is a lot of software mastery here. I like the POV and the contrast between the carriage and the city. I think it's a good idea to remove the poles.
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: cyphyr on July 06, 2020, 12:15:41 pm
Ok this is basically my final, I don't thing there is time for any more re-renders.
I may (probably not!) push the render layers about a bit.

VW Mini Bus is from DAZ3D
Gypsy Waggon and Horse are from HiveWire3D
Milano is from Sketch Fab
Trees are From X-frog and SpeedTree
Rocks are from Quixel Megascan
Flock of Birds is from Hannes (file sharing area on this forum)
Everything else is by myself.

Probably sit on this for a couple of hours and then upload this evening.

Travellers_17_raw.jpg
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: Jo Kariboo on July 06, 2020, 12:41:58 pm
Yes, it's better without the poles. I don't know about adding VW Mini Bus. It's just a personal impression but I already found excellent the contrast with the carriage and the rest futuristic. The sky and the light are excellent! Good luck!
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: Ariel DK on July 06, 2020, 12:59:15 pm
The image is wonderful, but i can't finish to figure out the contrast you created with the carriage and rest of the image, ahg! is just my own foolishness, good luck richard!
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: Dune on July 07, 2020, 02:12:19 am
I think I liked it better without the bus as well. You made it a bit too 'busy', IMHO. But the light is still terrific!
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: N-drju on July 07, 2020, 04:01:22 am
Wow... a really unusual collection of objects. :o Actually, a parade of travellers one might say - I like it!
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: Hetzen on July 07, 2020, 08:37:47 am
The evolution of a gypsy?  ;D

Nice render out of the box.
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: cyphyr on July 07, 2020, 08:52:39 am
Quote from: Hetzen on July 07, 2020, 08:37:47 amThe evolution of a gypsy?  ;D


Exactly :)
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: luvsmuzik on July 07, 2020, 10:52:59 am
Nailed it! Good luck! :)
Title: Re: Travellers entry WIP
Post by: Hannes on July 07, 2020, 12:15:33 pm
Cool image, Richard! Maybe the bus is a little bit too much here, but it's a great model. Good luck!!