Tropics

Started by RArcher, September 05, 2010, 05:06:12 PM

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RArcher

Bit of a tropical scene here.  Some of it I like but some not so much!  The jungle is made up of 12 different species of trees so it has nice diversity which I am happy with, and the water looks great.  The beach is more difficult, while I like that it is smooth and blown out it just doesn't integrate all that well.  Took a long time to render the water so maybe unlikely that I will redo anything.

Seth

The water is really really realistic.
great light too
excellent render

inkydigit

agree with Franck... excellent!

Henry Blewer

The beach is not so bad. Sometimes sand will reflect light so it looses any contrast.
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schmeerlap

Quote from: RArcher on September 05, 2010, 05:06:12 PM
The beach . . . . . . . . . .  just doesn't integrate all that well.

Excellent render.
Do you mean the transition from sand to jungle undergrowth. Maybe some patches of grass or some coarser grained sand may help the integration at the jungle fringe. And you'd just require a crop render to overlay your main render. But the suggested embellishments would be just that; not really necesary.

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dandelO

I like this a lot, too. Are there shadows enabled on the water object, or something? The transition of the sub-surface visibility and its cut-off point seems very drastic and sharp. Maybe, though, my eyes are just confusing the reflectivity on the beach sand with transparency. Most likely.

Regardless, I like it very much. Nice! :)

Kadri


If you did save the render as an EXR too , you can alter the brightness and so on the EXR and then comp it on this one.
Or use whatever method you like. I save in BMP and EXR at the same time for cases like this.
Mostly no need to render ones more.

Nice image Ryan  :)

domdib

Excellent water and vegetation.

Volker Harun

Agree with Schmeerlap ... though I'd rather add some dirt, scrubs and garbage for a smooth integration ...

Yep ... a cool render nonetheless

ra

I really like this render. Reminds me of the movie "Rogue" - definitely could be a shot from it.
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RArcher

Thanks for all the comments and suggestions, very much appreciated.  Here is a bit of an update toning the beach brightness down a bit.


Volker Harun

Much better :) Glad that you reworked it :)

Henry Blewer

A big improvement Ryan. Nice work with the sand. I like the darker area where the water effects the sand color. This is something I seem to remember to do, but somehow never do it.
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Seth

yeah much better indeed !