good morning

Started by swissAdA, September 18, 2011, 06:02:52 AM

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swissAdA

good morning  ;D

my newstest Render:
http://swissada.deviantart.com/#/d4a6l47

C&C Welcome

i hope you like it.
P.S. My text is always translated with Google  http://swissada.deviantart.com/

swissAdA

hmmm...
60 views. and no comment?
is it so bad?
P.S. My text is always translated with Google  http://swissada.deviantart.com/

dandelO

Hi, Pieter. I think the rays are a little overdone, such a scant little tree doesn't seem like it'd make so much of an impact on the thick fog you have casting rays over the scene. I'd maybe disable the ray traced shadows in that cloud layer and enable them in the atmosphere only to tone them down a bit.

Other than that, I like it a lot. :)

FrankB

It's a good image, suitable for the time of the year :)
But you don't happen to have soft shadows on, right? The rays are too sharp considering the distance from the shadow casting tree, and I would reckon soft shadows would fix that.

I generally find it more convenient to see an image right here on the forum, unless of course file size restrictions don't allow for it.

Regards,
Frank

choronr

This image has some very good possibilities if you might lower the camera; then, tilt the camera upwards to create 1/3 terrain, 2/3 sky. Of course there will be some adjustments to the sun elevation as well.

ra

Well, I have to say that I like the image as is  ;D
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Dune

Quotehmmm...
60 views. and no comment?
is it so bad?

It isn't bad at all, but I guess people are so struck with awe, they don't know what to say  ;)