Passing Storm Nxt Step

Started by mhaze, October 29, 2011, 03:38:12 AM

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mhaze

Hi all

Mainly an experiment in rock displacements but when I added the clouds(modified from NWDA cumulus pack) I thought I better try and finish it. Plants NWDA, Walli and Xfrog.

The rocks are stretched, rotated and redirected powerfractals

Mick

Henry Blewer

The foreground is wonderful looking. I like the mountain shapes, but the layering seems very extreme. The lighting in the clouds looks good. I think you stretched the clouds someway? They may look better without the strong horizontal elements seen on the central cloud.

This is a very good scene. The slopes come on too strongly on the hills. Maybe a smaller scale for these displacements would work better. Keep going with it!
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Kadri


Yes as Henry said the scene has potential but there are some little extreme settings.

The mountain on the left looks a little surreal because of this to me .
But there is a very nice image very near with some little adjustments , Mick  :)

mhaze

Hi

The strong horizontal elements are basically god rays. Agree the displacements are extreme may change them. Playing with POV at the moment as I don't like the placement of the trees.

Need to add a few fke stones and some waters edge veg.

Mick

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mhaze

Next stage - lost the perfect(ish) rocks when TG crashed! unfortunately I hadn't saved and can't remember what I did. Changed POV added vegetation. Will add some wildlife but not happy with composition.

Henry Blewer

The rock slopes look much better; a nice painted effect. Good work. I am sorry to hear you lost your tweaking. :P
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Jonathan

The scene seems much improved in the second render...and it's odd that sometimes losing a render in a crash leads one to produce something better the second time round! :)
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inkydigit

great moody lighting...interesting rocks!

TheBadger

very close to a luminist work!
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