Mountian View WIP

[DannyG]

NWDA's ornamental grass & Lilacs, Wallis Pines & Summer Gnarly's, X-Frogs bushes, comments critiques advise are welcomed

[Lady of the Lake]

The vegetation is wonderful. 

[Walli]

very nice start, but I would alter the sun position - especially the mountain in background looks flat and doesn´t reveal its structure

[Henry Blewer]

What Walli said... It needs some shadows to accent the displacements.

[TheBadger]

Agreed ^^

Everything looks good on its own. The image just needs some drama in the light.

[DannyG]

Thanks guys, appreciate the l@@k and advise, I'll take another shot with the light

[DannyG]

Subtle light and exposure changes

[masonspappy]

I do think that gives it more character

[Jo Kariboo]

I very like the last one !!!

[TheBadger]

I think it looks a lot better. The plants all look more natural now too.
Done or going to keep on with it?

[Oshyan]

Wow, that's a beauty! Very natural, looks like a snapshot taken on a recent hike or something.

- Oshyan

[mhaze]

The second one has a much stronger mood.  I like.

[Walli]

I think the second one looks a lot better, when it comes to the plants, really nice. I would reduce the brightness of the grass, but thats a matter of taste.

But - the mountains in the back still suffer from the light. As those mountains take sucha  huge part in this image, I would still play around with the light, so that the ridges start to catch light

[Lady of the Lake]

Better with the different lighting. 

[Zairyn Arsyn]

i really like the foreground on this one, nice terrain and use of foliage and trees

the second one def. has better lighting but i like the foreground on the first one better.