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été (Summer) WIP
Started by Jo Kariboo, July 20, 2013, 06:56:49 PM
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Jo Kariboo
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été (Summer) WIP
July 20, 2013, 06:56:49 PM
été (Summer) WIP.
Nothing final, but I am working in this field. I'll probably finish the first in more clearing the rock wall in the right.
ground vegetation: Walli
tree: X-Frog
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Re: été (Summer) WIP
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July 21, 2013, 03:42:34 AM
Very pleasant and uplifting renders. I would do two things: add more tree species to the far end, and/or add some color variation. And I would bring in much more semi-high grass in the front end.
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Re: été (Summer) WIP
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July 21, 2013, 08:28:18 AM
Ulco thank you for your advice !
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what's the difference?
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Re: été (Summer) WIP
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July 21, 2013, 03:31:04 PM
I like the path up the hill in image 2 a lot. Both images are rather nice over all.
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Re: été (Summer) WIP
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July 22, 2013, 05:32:02 PM
no. 2 for me too, Jo!
some more tree species as Ulco said, will make this perfect!
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Re: été (Summer) WIP
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July 23, 2013, 02:38:19 AM
Agree, the foreground has a lot of lovely shadowing, subtlety, and variation. The background just needs more variation itself to make a complete image. I think the 1st one is my preference, by a small amount.
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Re: été (Summer) WIP
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July 23, 2013, 11:05:41 PM
Thanks TheBadger, Inkydigit and Oshyan ! I make some test but it's not finish.
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Re: été (Summer) WIP
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July 28, 2013, 12:47:16 PM
Very nice, big fan of images like this
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