Mama and Baby

Started by Lady of the Lake, March 22, 2014, 11:25:37 PM

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Lady of the Lake

Trees by X-Frog; reeds by Dune; Flower by Walli; moose by Lynes' creations.

Thanks for looking.

choronr

Very well done. One thing to check. Unless my eyes are going bad, it looks like some grasses are coming out of the rocks. Also, the rocks look like they could use a little more displacement.

Lady of the Lake

Are you talking about the right hand lower corner.....that is supposed to be mud.   :)

choronr

Quote from: Lady of the Lake on March 23, 2014, 12:22:14 AM
Are you talking about the right hand lower corner.....that is supposed to be mud.   :)
Sorry, the mud looked like rocks to me. Maybe less displacement on the mud; and, include some tiny stones interspersed on the mud?

yossam

Good pic.......you might want to make a small adjustment on the baby. Rotate it a little counter-clockwise so you get more of a profile shot. There is some texture stretching on it's face and nose. The models are really old and there is not enough geometry to make it any better.  :)

Lady of the Lake

Thanks Yossam...I will do that.   :)

Lady of the Lake

Changed things around a bit and got rid of the "mud".  I think this is better. 

yossam

I agree..............much better.  :)

TheBadger

It has been eaten.

Hannes


Oshyan

The new one is quite a bit better, yes. The moose models are unfortunately fairly low resolution, especially the textures, so that hurts things a bit. But the overall scene is very nice indeed. Maybe you can find some higher quality quadruped models? :D

- Oshyan

Lady of the Lake

Thanks to all.  Regarding the models......they were free.  Since this is only a hobby, I don't buy many models. 

choronr

This one is much better although I did like the composition of the first. And remember, many hobbyist's images sometimes turn out to be masterpieces.