Quietude - WIP

masonspappy · April 30, 2014, 03:36:38 PM

Still very much a work in progress.
Girl: created in DAZ and updated Blender.
Sea shells and weathered seat: Blender
Sea Oats: Made in xFrog
Sand texture courtesy of Dandelo.
Working with water now.
Comments and suggestions welcome as always.

Upon Infinity · April 30, 2014, 04:04:44 PM

Suggestion: Do a render from the other angle.

oldm4n · May 01, 2014, 01:06:12 AM

peaceful image; I'd like see some foam on the sea

archonforest · May 01, 2014, 03:46:18 AM

agree with Upon Infinity. The different angle would be about 90 degrees to the left

inkydigit · May 01, 2014, 02:29:50 PM

I could do with a holiday.... please render some more!

looks peaceful and relaxing... perfect!

cheers
J

bobbystahr · May 02, 2014, 08:42:28 AM

Like...agree a different view might be better but over all nice...maybe some wake foam but it almost looks to calm for that.As there is disturbance enough to make the plants wave, maybe something should/could be done with her skirt to carry that motion through the whole picture

masonspappy · May 13, 2014, 08:12:15 AM

Added Dune's foam TGC uploaded to File Sharing forum last week and still working on the waves. increased the elevation a bit and added clouds and Indian Blanket flowers (xfrog). I think the clouds look over-exposed.
@bobbystahr - the dress flutters more to the right now, to give the impression of wind movement. If I move it any further I'll loose my PG-13 rating.

archonforest · May 13, 2014, 09:38:26 AM

F... PG-13 man...we just switch to PG-18. Problem solved

kaedorg · May 13, 2014, 10:00:57 AM

I promise I didn't look at the girl.
Just watching the sea and especially the foam
In my opinion, it is not working yet. The first part is the main problem. It seems
this part is too windy, too wavy. I would suggest something without waves and wind effect. You add some foam.
And you also can add foam on wet sand.

David

Dune · May 13, 2014, 10:40:17 AM

Are the scales allright? I don't mean within the object

but between object and sea/beach. Somehow the girl seems a giant (as a whole).

kaedorg · May 13, 2014, 10:51:44 AM

Quote from: Dune on May 13, 2014, 10:40:17 AM
Are the scales allright? I don't mean within the object but between object and sea/beach. Somehow the girl seems a giant (as a whole).

Go back at your seat Ulco, watching her with your eyes at 5 cms from the monitor let you think she is a giant

Seriously It could be a scale problem here

choronr · May 13, 2014, 11:17:14 AM

A very good WIP. Looking forward to the next.

Dune · May 13, 2014, 11:59:06 AM

Wip means something very different in Dutch

choronr · May 13, 2014, 12:15:47 PM

Tell us; what does it mean?

masonspappy · May 13, 2014, 01:21:08 PM

Quote from: choronr on May 13, 2014, 12:15:47 PM
Tell us; what does it mean?

Was sort of wondering that myself...