Breaking in

Started by Kadri, January 19, 2015, 11:08:44 PM

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Kadri


This doesn't work quite as i would like to but as another doodle i hope it is worth to share.

The worst part is probably that i should have made the rings more like the Saturn rings with many more ring parts in it with subtle color changes.


Kadri


A small change.Yeah lens flare :)

Dune

The effect is great. But, (here I am again) aren't the rings a little on the dense side?

Kadri


"But" is always welcome :)

I might change those rings maybe.

Kadri


Second version. I think the rings are OK now. Not quite the same image now of course.


j meyer

Not the same,but definitely more pleasing to the eye.

Dune



Hannes

Much better! There are some dots or noises near the moon. Is this intended? If so, what is it?

Kadri


Not sure which ones you mean Hannes.
There are some small parts from the lens flare and from the breaking up parts from the ring.
There shouldn't be more dots and noises.

Hannes

See image below. Somehow this looks a bit odd imho.

Kadri


Hannes you are aware that that moon breaks the rings (those white dots-noises are the ring parts) and is coming from the left side to the right approaching the big Saturn like planet?

Hannes



TheBadger

Great idea Kadri! Pretty good execution too.
It has been eaten.