The Birds Final?

[mhaze]

Terrain created in world machine, heather is from Dune and the crows are from Daz.  Tree and greass clumps were made in Speedtree. The rest Terragen. 

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I like the cloud.

[kaedorg]

nice one here. IMO the tree makes difficult to see the birds. It took a time to understand what is tree what is birds.
Could be better to separate them
Otherwise, i like the colors, clouds. A great one

David

[mhaze]

Aaah! I see what you mean.  I'll play with that.

[Oshyan]

Agree with kaedorg, but otherwise looks quite nice. Dramatic sky, great lighting, especially on the left.

- Oshyan

[Mahnmut]

Also very nice vegetation.
The ambiguity between tree and birds could be interesting, as it is now it´s rather atriple ambiguity tree-background-birds, that makes it confusing on first view.
Otherwise great!

J

[choronr]

Looks very good; maybe just an adjustment to the point of view.

[Dune]

It has an eerie, dramatic feel to it, like some sort of interaction between tree and birds, enhanced by the ominous sky. But I agree about the 'invisibility' of the tree. A solution would be to add some (local) mist behind the tree, so it stands out a little more. If you further increase patchyness of the water, it may have an interesting effect, like local winds roughing up the water.

[mhaze]

Cheers all, some more work on this seems in order.

[mhaze]

I've added some of your suggestions,  I think it is a definite improvement!

[choronr]

Looking really good Mick!

[mhaze]

Thankyou.

[fleetwood]

Nice job. To my eye, you kept the mood and removed any confusion.

[mhaze]

Cheers

[DocCharly65]

In my eyes it's very good now!