Field

Started by Cocateho, May 27, 2015, 09:28:27 AM

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Cocateho

For some reason I've been focused on fields/meadows lately. Maybe I need some new/better suited objects, can't seem to quite get what I'm after. Still having fun playing though. Here's a crop with the terrain, its missing about the top 3rd but I've already got the clouds pretty much how I want.

archonforest

Very nice start. I really like the field/colors and the trees behind.
For some unknown reason I do not feel that the mountain is done at the back.
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Hannes

I like it. But I agree with Archonforest. There is too less depth. The mountains should be a bit hazier and the plants in the foreground could use some DOF. Maybe this helps.

Upon Infinity

It's got good foliage distribution.

Cocateho

I agree about the background. I like it and I don't but I've been at a loss as to what I need to fix exactly. I'll try your suggestions, see how it goes.

TheBadger

Nice one. A little tweaking may help to make it more like a photo 8)
It has been eaten.

Cocateho

A little update. still tweaking a bit, especially the DoF.

Cocateho

Not sure to call this final yet or not, the DoF turned out a bit different with the higher quality than I thought. Hmm. Still, happy with most of it.

Hannes

Much better. The haze looks good now.
I can't see any DOF. Is it gone? A good amount of DOF for the foreground plants right in front of the camera would improve it significantly imho.

Cocateho

Quote from: Hannes on May 28, 2015, 11:00:28 AM
Much better. The haze looks good now.
I can't see any DOF. Is it gone? A good amount of DOF for the foreground plants right in front of the camera would improve it significantly imho.

Its very slight, I think I adjusted the distance too close, but It looked like it was ok in a low quality render. I can't remember what values I had so I'm tinkering.

DocCharly65

I can see it, I can see it!  ;D

Nice image!

Cocateho

Been in a mood to rework old projects apparently. Here's a little update, changed some trees and the rock faces. Still tinkering a bit if anyone has suggestions?

bobbystahr

Quote from: Cocateho on September 21, 2015, 03:58:31 PM
Been in a mood to rework old projects apparently. Here's a little update, changed some trees and the rock faces. Still tinkering a bit if anyone has suggestions?

As Hannes mentioned a goodly amount of DOF on the very close plants would make this pop...5 stars on composition and texturing....
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

Cocateho

Another pass with some more tweaks.

Bobby- the final will have DoF I just turned it off for the sake of testing.

bobbystahr

Quote from: Cocateho on September 21, 2015, 05:51:11 PM
Another pass with some more tweaks.

Bobby- the final will have DoF I just turned it off for the sake of testing.

Smart move time wise...love what you're doing to those mountains...carry on....
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist