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Started by Preacherman, June 01, 2015, 06:54:15 AM
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Preacherman
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Sunrise
June 01, 2015, 06:54:15 AM
trying for a good sunrise.
comments welcome :-)
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Re: Sunrise
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June 01, 2015, 07:00:45 AM
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: June 01, 2015, 07:03:19 AM by N-drju
Reminds me of one of my own renders.
Nice sky and grass. You could add some more small-scaled ripples on the water to break the sun reflection into tiny glowing bits.
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June 01, 2015, 12:22:05 PM
thx, i'll try that
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Re: Sunrise
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June 01, 2015, 01:28:04 PM
I like it....
...but somehow I have a feeling it is not done. I feel a bit empty the picture. I would
try to play with the close by trees...I think one is cool to stay close to the camera but maybe the other
one(or more) can go further down on the hill.
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June 02, 2015, 07:22:43 AM
The trees can be added to the 'rightish' hill, the one just before the lake/sea but I would definitely leave the front empty as it is with grass only and those two conifers. This gives a nice feeling of free space.
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Re: Sunrise
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June 02, 2015, 08:17:51 AM
Nice image, but i think the sun is to high up for that much colour and dark foreground (on the other hand, the foreground would appear dark when your eyes adapt to looking into the sun).
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June 04, 2015, 07:51:06 AM
thx for the comments :-)
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