Crusin'

[yossam]

To be continued.................I know everything is too "clean". Will be addressed in a later version. Also writing a small back story for this one. Stay tuned. 

[Dune]

Nice setup. You need to look at the lowpoliness of the gas things, and the ladies are a bit sweaty (from admiring the truck) 

[yossam]

Dune,


Which gas things are you talking about? And, if you had noticed the thermometer, it is pushing 90 F in the middle of the night. That tends to make one sweat. 

[DocCharly65]

It's ok with the sweaty look.. carwash or catfight or whatever... 

I'm looking forward to the continuation - hey - an empty gas station - that would be a nice playground for me too 
So many object, you could put there 

[Dune]

The top and the round thing on the front tank station thing, but on the other hand, perhaps it's supposed to look a bit angled. Dirt, indeed, is more important.

[yossam]

Changes..................

[bobbystahr]

waitin on the 'back story' promised earlier, heh heh heh...cool scene

[Dune]

Great. What happens if you RT the reflective shader on the car; do render times go sky high? Otherwise that would enhance the car I think. I would still reduce the sweaty look for more realism.

[TheBadger]

this has all the makings os a 70's sexploitation film, with a modern Tarantino angle.

[yossam]

Dune,


RT is on, don't know what's going on with that. Any suggestions?

[Dune]

Yeah, I can see that if I look carefully (like near the right lady's ... eh... shoulder). Probably the lights are overshining it a bit. Don't worry about it, I think. I sometimes say too much, perhaps.

[j meyer]

You could try a lower specular highlights value maybe.

[yossam]

Small details................


Backstory is in progress...............Bobby. 

[Dune]

Great, that stuff on the floor, and the ladies are super too.

[DocCharly65]

Oh yeah! the stuff on the floor is cool!