Bored and Broke on Saturday Night

[bobbystahr]

and this happened on my screen...a WIP  status pic so C&C welcome

[Dune]

Nice models and nice render. A little real ivy would be nice along those walls. One thing that strikes me; the roof construction; not very efficient in coping with rain, I suppose.

[archonforest]

indeed pretty cool one bobby!

[ADE]

I was going to say b4 I saw dune's comment, that roof needs guttering!!!!

nice image bobby

[Dune]

New roofing in fact, by a pro preferably!

[bobbystahr]

Comments noted and in fact the building which was part of a comp I got into and not modeled by me though I did make the book shelves and books. The gutters are a must. Ivy will be grown when the building is complete and was intended but it was late at night...Pretty creepy characters eh, found em on line years ago and lost em in my files till Saturday. Gonna keep it gloomy; suits the story in there.

[bobbystahr]

New roofing in fact, by a pro preferably!

Heh heh, I'll send you the .obj if y wanna tackle it. You're the only pro I know

[mhaze]

Nice one bobby.

[Dune]

No thanks, Bobby. But you guys did notice my specific crits, did you not? Rooftiles are laid under eachother instead of over eachother topdown. Good for a nice shower inside the store 

[archonforest]

Unless this is a very dry area and rain is not an issue at all...

[ADE]

I missed that about the tiles on wrong way and me in the building trade as well!!!

[luvsmuzik]

Well heck, the scene is neat. Those dudes are well placed. I like what you did with burst on your lamps. While I am not in home construction, your bookstore front is also missing a stone face there in the front, maybe intentional behind the bench? Except for the actual building, the rest of your models are great! Good lighting as well.

[j meyer]

A weathered sign saying Book Store (or whatever) would be nice.
Or a bleached inscription on the wall.
Although..., these guys look pretty suspicious, might be a fake store anyway.

[zaxxon]

Broke and bored on a Saturday night, and hanging out at a book store? No women either. Confess Bobby, you've always been a nerd musician!  . Seriously though, I always enjoy your 'story' illustrations. But with that car I'd be crusing for some ladies! 

[bobbystahr]

Broke and bored on a Saturday night, and hanging out at a book store? No women either. Confess Bobby, you've always been a nerd musician!  . Seriously though, I always enjoy your 'story' illustrations. But with that car I'd be crusing for some ladies! 

The owner of the Alfa Romeo is in the back having a wiz...heh heh heh...they have gathered to play poker after hours and were waiting for old zombie man to shuffle up....