F 30 with a cargo delivery

[bobbystahr]

Just sketching on the dell while I await my tech to come and fix the gawd-damnCorsair. Found this lovely F 30 loaded with cargo as a lwo on DMI, http://www.dmi-3d.net/index.html a vehicle share site and it was too nice to sit unused in my vehicle dir. The road is a simple SS shader road in the default scene I set up as a display platform for viewing new vehicles and I dressed it up with the Bluehouse and some  XFROG Silver Maples and Dune grass.
Dunno what was up with me when I did the clouds but I like the atmo they supply. C&C welcome as I've nothing better to do with the corsair down than to tweak current images...

[Oshyan]

This is actually pretty nice Bobby, a pretty natural, realistic feel and I like your overcast but almost-breaking-through-the-clouds lighting. I do find that yellow stripe on the road a bit overly bright and unaged, however.

- Oshyan

[bobbystahr]

This is actually pretty nice Bobby, a pretty natural, realistic feel and I like your overcast but almost-breaking-through-the-clouds lighting. I do find that yellow stripe on the road a bit overly bright and unaged, however.

- Oshyan

that was a last minute test, it's a very narrow SS shaded broken up with an image map and I meant to fade that with fractal break up but forgot...

[bobbystahr]

with suggestion +...C&C still welcome, they can always get better.

[fleetwood]

Looks pretty nice. Truck looks showroom clean and house just built. Maybe some dirt/rust/moss/grime added on house and truck ?

[bobbystahr]

Looks pretty nice. Truck looks showroom clean and house just built. Maybe some dirt/rust/moss/grime added on house and truck ?

Well I wouldn't accept product delivered in a dirty truck so I left it clean (that's a load of amplifires in them crates) but I agree the house could use a touch.

[Dune]

You need more stuff (herbs, ivy, rubbish, dead branch, shrub...), it's very clean, I mean. Sky is great. And I don't understand the whitish on the roadsides, what's that? Better tone that down I think.

[bobbystahr]

You need more stuff (herbs, ivy, rubbish, dead branch, shrub...), it's very clean, I mean. Sky is great. And I don't understand the whitish on the roadsides, what's that? Better tone that down I think.

I agree re: detritus but am currently working on the dell till the Corsair gets up off it's butt and........ That white is a failed fake stones, will fix those, they got all messed up with a Density fractal I added because they were looking artificially placed...bit of a fail I agree. Wish this new computer trauma would end, makes me not wanna do stuff.

[bobbystahr]

Added some stuff fixed some stuff

[Dune]

Much better! But more stuff can be added. Some dust on the (very black) road, perhaps. Some trash thrown out of car window, more grass/flowers/herbs...

[bobbystahr]

Much better! But more stuff can be added. Some dust on the (very black) road, perhaps. Some trash thrown out of car window, more grass/flowers/herbs...

I hear ya but bear in mind I'm doing this on a dell optiflex780 with a slow cpu and only 8 G RAM...it's getting very sluggish as it is.Thought about some dust but it looks too humid/about to rain like for that was my thinking; additionally the road is asphalt and it's black here...I could desaturate it maybe but i don't want grey. Here in Canada we discourage throwing trash out the window, hee hee hee. I have a giant tractor tire that I was thinking of plunking down in the lawn with a stand of hydrangas growing in it, that's very Canuck.

EDIT

Going to bed, 1/4 done in 1hr+ so it'll keep till my morning.

[bobbystahr]

Here's the update that rendered while I slept...seems to have gone faster than I expected and could have waited up for it."hero rock and moss additions from A P...thanks very much. Bicycle against the house from rendo freestuff, papus3d military bicycle.

[Dune]

Bicycle is a nice touch. It's more lived now.

[N-drju]

Is the driver a part of the model or have you post-worked him in?

[luvsmuzik]

Awww, you got mossy rocks! Nice! Great progress here.