Barren World

nvseal · November 12, 2007, 07:18:34 PM

Back to space...

old_blaggard · November 12, 2007, 07:32:44 PM

Very nice

. Not as dramatic as some of your earlier work, but it has quite impressive realism nonetheless.

nvseal · November 12, 2007, 10:57:24 PM

Here is something else I'm working on. I don't particularly like the composition yet so if anybody has any ideas I'm all ears.

dhavalmistry · November 12, 2007, 11:11:30 PM

the other plant is too far out....maybe bring in a little closer.....and the moon of the desert planet could be little smaller....just to imply scale (Jupiter and its moons)....

Will · November 13, 2007, 01:25:33 PM

too much detail in the moon, by this I mean the it draws the eye to much from the desert planet (which I suspect is the "hero" object). Also the green planet feels like its placed weird, don't know what it is but it does.

nvseal · November 13, 2007, 06:59:13 PM

Okay, I tried something else with the other planet. I don't like the clouds (they are two clouds layers from my planetery clouds setup). For some reason when I add more than these two cloud layers, the clouds also appare on the desert planet as well

. It doesn't make any sense.

dhavalmistry · November 13, 2007, 10:16:07 PM

just had an idea...since you have 2 planets/moon in the scene....maybe you can show that they are about to line up....you know...that once in a 5000 year event

....

nvseal · November 14, 2007, 01:36:02 PM

Okay, here is the next one. I changed he camera a bit and took the clouds out. I think I may make this the final. DH, I thought abut doing that. I actually just had an idea that I may look into.

Seth · November 14, 2007, 01:44:05 PM

i prefer the green planet

but the compo is far better than the first one !

nvseal · November 14, 2007, 04:29:28 PM

Here is another with the green planet.

Seth · November 14, 2007, 05:22:36 PM

very very good one !
you are the tg2 planet master nvseal

Will · November 15, 2007, 05:25:05 AM

aye that you are mate.

Marcos Silveira · November 15, 2007, 06:04:35 AM

Well, I think that a living, covered by oceans, planet, has some clouds because of the evaporation caused by its sun heat.
So, I prefer the one with the cloudy planet (it can be green too

) and in which it is more distant (the gravitational waves would tear them all apart if they're closer).
But I agree with the others, you're very good at "spacescapes"!!!!!
Your planets are outstanding and I like very much the deserted one!!!