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The Islands W.I.P. Update 3
The Islands W.I.P. Update 3
Started by littlecannon, August 23, 2009, 10:12:28 AM
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littlecannon
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The Islands W.I.P. Update 3
August 23, 2009, 10:12:28 AM
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: August 25, 2009, 02:30:21 PM by littlecannon
Hi All... inspired by Dan's Maldives image and info (thanks Dan), I have made this little WIP. The water is not right and the texturing has a way to go. All comments and suggestions warmly welcomed...
Cheers, Simon.
I just need to tweak that texture a bit more...
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Re: The Islands W.I.P.
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August 23, 2009, 10:28:57 AM
good image ... the water needs some transparency and some waves ...it looks like a flat mirror
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Re: The Islands W.I.P.
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August 23, 2009, 10:41:58 AM
I don't agree with aymenk, the scales of the water is just right compared to the size of the islands. With a calm sea this is probably exactly as it will look like in real life.
A tad more transparency would be nice, but not too much.
The next step might be to find a bit more interesting seed for your terrain, maybe get something more atol like?
Good work so far!
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Re: The Islands W.I.P.
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August 23, 2009, 10:50:01 AM
Thanks guys, I'll tweak the transparency and mess with the Island shapes a bit. I might go with a few different weather situations when I get closer to convincing Island shapes. I'll keep these shapes on file as I like the unreal artistic smoothness of them.
I think I'll get busy with Dune's Breaker tutorial (does this teach me windmills and head spins?)
Cheers, Simon
I just need to tweak that texture a bit more...
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Re: The Islands W.I.P.
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August 23, 2009, 03:31:07 PM
Hi
Wonderful!
Again an image where I wish to have/see a deckchair with my towel
ciao
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Re: The Islands W.I.P.
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August 24, 2009, 04:41:57 AM
Funny, I like these more simplified, abstract shapes. Not realistic perhaps, but sort of... symbolic, iconic. A good image already IMO, but if absolute realism is what your after, the tweaks you and others mention will probably help.
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Re: The Islands W.I.P. Update
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August 24, 2009, 02:16:15 PM
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Here's another iteration... not too much more, mainly island shapes and water transparency. More to come... and Thanks Oshyan.
Simon.
I just need to tweak that texture a bit more...
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Re: The Islands W.I.P. Update
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August 24, 2009, 02:19:12 PM
lovely view
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Re: The Islands W.I.P. Update
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August 24, 2009, 07:33:45 PM
you've got it this time even the cloud are in the right place ...
nice image...
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Re: The Islands W.I.P. Update
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August 25, 2009, 07:28:14 AM
Thanks Seth and aymenk2003... I've got another one rendering at home... with a little amusing detail. I'll keep ya posted.
I just need to tweak that texture a bit more...
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Re: The Islands W.I.P. Update 3
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August 25, 2009, 02:31:30 PM
Just a small set of stones added.... can you spot them?
Cheers, Simon.
I just need to tweak that texture a bit more...
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Re: The Islands W.I.P. Update 3
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August 25, 2009, 03:39:30 PM
great idea
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Re: The Islands W.I.P. Update 3
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August 25, 2009, 03:52:01 PM
hehehehe bravo !!! ^^
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Re: The Islands W.I.P. Update 3
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August 25, 2009, 04:09:23 PM
Hi
Oh poor man
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Re: The Islands W.I.P. Update 3
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August 26, 2009, 05:03:53 AM
Thanks Peeps... got another going now with waves... Thanks to Dune. Post it later...
Cheers,
Simon.
I just need to tweak that texture a bit more...
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