Embrace

[Jack]

my first render with the new build enjoy^^



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[Tangled-Universe]

That's a neat piece of sci-fi work, not my favourite genre, but definitely well done here
The only minor crit I have is that at first glance I thought "what's that in the middle?".
Good work on atmosphere and clouds!

Martin

[Henry Blewer]

"What's that in the middle?" was also my thought. I did not comment because I had to go to work. I would go with a more organic looking spaceship. It would be more exotic, not so 1970's Popular Science illustration like.
The scene would look great without the space craft. I know you're into scifi, me to, but sometimes alien looks alien without the props.

[MacGyver]

Fantastic as always. I agree about the ship, it looks almost like a black bar they use in films Have you thought about placing it a little less in the middle? Like more of the golden ratio or so? Perhaps that would make it look even more dynamic?!

[FrankB]

Hi Jack, I like how the green from the forest "pops" out

[old_blaggard]

Beautiful colors in the work. I'm not going to comment on the shape of the spacecraft () but I really like its strong silhouette in the composition.

[Kadri]

Nice image Wetbanana.
The forest seems to me that it is not as  the same as the background .
It looks a little apart from the rest , for me at least .
Did you do more post on the background Wetbanana ?

Kadri.

[Jack]

Nice image Wetbanana.
The forest seems to me that it is not as  the same as the background .
It looks a little apart from the rest , for me at least .
Did you do more post on the background Wetbanana ?

Kadri.

nope its was all rendered in one pass

I may redo this image with a different ship i have been cooking up some voidhawks

[Kadri]

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nope its was all rendered in one pass
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Interesting 

Kadri

[D.A. Bentley (SuddenPlanet)]

I like the image a lot, especially the large rock formations (Can you explain how to create those?)  I am still learning about all the different nodes & shaders.

I agree the ship is a bit of a distraction, but I think the placement of the ship smack dab in the middle of the composition is the thing that most people are being put off by.  I would place the ship in a more dramatic position and angle, for example try a composition with the ship coming into the frame from the upper Left (In the bright Spot of the image).

Great work!

[Linda McCarthy]

I think your render is awesome..and really good, but I do think the ship needs to look a little less boxy.  Linda