Thank you all for the kind comments. I do want to take it further but I'm unsure how. I've not even fully explored the terrain I made. The canyon is ten kilometres long and that section I rendered was just after entering it

So I might get lucky if I explore it more. There's some really interesting cave like bits and then much more open sections.
I used a lot of reference from the actual canyon on getting the terrain shape right so I'm not sure if I can develop that aspect any further. I did originally want to create a very bright light beam coming from a gap at the top of the canyon but as far as light rays go I'm not sure how to do this in just pure atmosphere and I would need the light beam to be bright enough to reflect slightly off of the walls too if I'm going for complete realism.
I would also love to render this larger but that's as large as I could get the free version of Terragen to go. I even rendered it on its side so I could get as much height as possible. It's a shame that the restrictions in image size are different for each dimension rather than just being 800px x 800px giving you the choice between portrait and landscape but rotating the camera works in a pinch