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Offline choronr

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #60 on: December 24, 2014, 03:22:46 AM »
Richard, this is looking fabulous. 

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #61 on: December 24, 2014, 07:43:11 AM »
OK, here's me again with some comment: I think it's cooled a little too much now, and you have to check the size of those reindeer, they look enormous in comparison to the ship. Or the ship is way too small. How big were these ships, 20m? Dear are quite small in real life. So, off to work again, Richard, sorry  ;)

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #62 on: December 26, 2014, 08:54:48 PM »
The deer are at scale to the ship.............see if you can find them.  ::)

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #63 on: December 26, 2014, 09:30:05 PM »
Looks like a winner Richard; and yes, I do see the deer. Be sure the final render is in a large size.

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #64 on: December 26, 2014, 10:13:23 PM »
Great shadows.

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #65 on: December 27, 2014, 03:57:08 AM »
Some adjustments.................... :-\

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #66 on: December 27, 2014, 07:51:13 AM »
It's gathering momentum!

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #67 on: December 28, 2014, 08:47:13 AM »
Looking better and better. Could the boat be lightened up just a tad? (Or is the deep shadow part of the effect you're after?)

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #68 on: December 28, 2014, 03:29:02 PM »
Render time was almost 8 hours................ ???

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #69 on: December 28, 2014, 03:53:20 PM »
Aaah,the dreaded norsemen rolling in.

A question,if you don't mind:what is that structure on top of the
foreground hill/mountain to the right?

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #70 on: December 28, 2014, 03:54:12 PM »
Perfection; very good!

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #71 on: December 28, 2014, 04:03:51 PM »
The structure is a large horn used for greetings or warnings..............whatever the case might be.  ;D

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #72 on: December 28, 2014, 04:27:47 PM »
 8) Nice detail.
Keep going Richard!

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #73 on: December 29, 2014, 07:25:38 AM »
It's really coming together, Richard. There's one thing you should take a look at; there's a stretched piece of fake stone near the ship's bow. A too sharp mask or fuzzy zone maybe? And I would still do some work on the rocks, make them more irregular and without the tiny displacements. Maybe a simple billowed or voronoi noise with sizes 0.5/2/0.01 and a displacement of 0.5 and offset of 0.1. See what happens then.

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Re: WIP-Iceland
« Reply #74 on: December 29, 2014, 05:27:19 PM »
Worked on the rocks again, changed the POV just a tad, tweaked the maps on the ship. I'm thru unless someone can give me a reason not to be.  ;D