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Offline SILENCER

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #135 on: March 08, 2018, 06:53:05 PM »
VER102

Fabulous, very nicely done.
Take another stab at those clouds and you're in fat city

Offline Hannes

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #136 on: March 08, 2018, 08:06:58 PM »
Thanks guys.

Take another stab at those clouds and you're in fat city

That's what I thought. The clouds looked cool in the preview, but in this resolution somehow artificial.

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #137 on: March 14, 2018, 09:49:37 AM »
I think the landscaping is done. I worked on the clouds, but I'm still not happy with them.

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #138 on: March 14, 2018, 01:10:11 PM »
Very good the fall is very successful. I have the impression that the color of light and athmosphere could be improved. With this vegetation we are in a tropical country but I'm wrong maybe but the atmosphere by this light makes me think more of a desert.

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #139 on: March 14, 2018, 06:22:26 PM »
Yes, maybe a bit warmer and fatter, like this...

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #140 on: March 14, 2018, 07:56:36 PM »
Thanks guys! Good suggestions. I'll play with light and atmosphere a bit...

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #141 on: March 15, 2018, 02:52:51 PM »
All I gotta say is from the WIPs that have popped up the 3 judges are gonna be really hard pressed to not wind up with a multi-way tie for best of show....with the Dune tweak this is yet another  winner....
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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #142 on: March 15, 2018, 04:41:28 PM »
Thanks Bobby!!
Here is a small low res render with some mist and higher Red sky decay settings. Some contrast and brightness increasing in PW. Still tweaking...

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #143 on: March 15, 2018, 05:30:46 PM »
Less and more subtle, I;d say and maybe not the prominent cloud. Don't forget it's about cliffs though...  8)

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #144 on: March 15, 2018, 05:32:48 PM »
Don't forget it's about cliffs though...  8)

Oh yes, you're right... :)

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #145 on: March 16, 2018, 01:42:51 AM »
Don't forget it's about cliffs though...  8)

Oh yes, you're right... :)

that's the problem I'm having...cliffs have always been elusive for me.
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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #146 on: March 16, 2018, 10:46:05 AM »
OK, here is the (hopefully) final version. Slightly postworked (contrast, brightness, sharpened and a little chromatic aberration).

Offline Jo Kariboo

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #147 on: March 16, 2018, 11:35:16 AM »
I prefer this last version with its colors. The addition of light fog is a good addition in my opinion. I feel a form of damp and overwhelming heat as if it had just been raining.

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #148 on: March 16, 2018, 12:54:29 PM »
Thanks! Yes, getting feedback is so helpful. When you're working on an image for a long time, you loose your objective view sometimes.

Now I have to decide, which image I'll submit...

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Re: Hannes' Cliff WIPs
« Reply #149 on: March 16, 2018, 03:55:12 PM »
I think this is the best yet, I barely noticed the crocs in the previous images, actually didn't notice them and thought you'd added them till I looked back.
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