dam in the mountain (barrage en montagne)

[Tyrcrash]

j'ai passé beaucoup de temps sur ce projet pur un résultat un peu décevant (disons que je suis content des montagne et des nuage mais pas du premier plan avec le barrage ce qui est un peu stupide...) les arbres sont évidemment de Wally.

I spent much time on this project purely a result a bit disappointing (let's say I'm happy with the mountains and clouds but not the forefront with the dam which is a bit stupid ...) trees are obviously Wally . (google traduction)

[Mahnmut]

I really like the Dam itself, it really looks like concrete and the intersection with the rock to the left is beautiful!

The only thing that needs improvemend in my opinion is the chanel and its banks below the dam, those need more detail, perhaps more vegetation or maybe diagonal  concrete, I think the yellow "sand" which looks ok in the distance is not sufficient for a closeup.
I hope you don´t mind, I couldn´t resist to photoshop, because I think the dam itself is worth to be further developed:



Best regards,
Jan

Sorry, I don´t know how to post thumbs, if you don´t like it I´ll take it away.

[Tyrcrash]

merci pour le commentaire, le fait que vous retouchez mon image ne me gêne pas du tout (au contraire étant assez autocritique avec moi-meme, ce genre de démarche prouve que ce que je fait n'est pas si inintéressant que ça)
Sinon q'entendez-vous par "diagonale concrete"? (moi et l'anglais...)


thank you for the comment, the fact that you retouch my image does not bother me at all (quite the contrary being self-critical with myself, this kind of thing proves that what I am doing is not so uninteresting it)
Otherwise what do you mean by "diagonal concrete"? (Me and the English ...) (google traduction)

[domdib]

I think Jan has made a nice change. The clouds are very good.

[Kadri]

Tyrcrash , i think you should continue to improve this image. It has great potential ! Nice 

[Mahnmut]

Hi Tyrcrash,
by "diagonal concrete" I just meant the sides of the chanel, rising diagonally, made of concrete, more or less like I tried to photoshop it.

Best Regards,
Jan

[Tyrcrash]

Ok j'ai compris c'est une bonne idée mais dans les montagne des pyrénées (france) je n'ai jamais vu de canal bétonnés qui prolonge les barrage ms peut être que ca existe, en plus je n'ai aucune idée de comment je pourrais faire ça (à part utiliser un objet) pour faire le "canal" j'ai juste utilisé un paint shader mis comme "blending shader"  sur un "surface layer" ayant un "displacement" négatif. Sinon pour que l'eau s'arrête au niveau du barrage j'ai utilisé la méthode pour masqué l'eau de Dandelo.

Ok I understand this is a good idea but in the mountains of the Pyrenees (France) I have never seen a channel that extends the dam concreted ms can be as they seem to exist, plus I have no idea how I could do that (use a separate object). to the "channel" I just used a paint shader set as "blending shader on a" surface layer "with a" displacement "negative. If not for the water stops at the dam I used the method for hidden water Dandelo. (google traduction)

[Mahnmut]

Hello Tyrcrash,
The idea with the concrete was just an example.
I only thought that this part of your image needs more Detail. More differeint Vegetation or some more rocks would also be interesting.
Central message was: keep the dam, its good!
Best Regards,
Jan

[Tyrcrash]

petite amelioration.
little update

[Mahnmut]

I think I begin to understand the scale of the dam!
Those are small trees, not small bushes?
I imagined the dam much smaller, like perhaps eight meters high.
I think that is the perspektive from above, which is necessary to keep the beautiful background in sight.
Well, go on like this and it will look as huge as it is supposed to!

Best Regards,
Jan