Awe As A Time Of Day

Started by Upon Infinity, November 05, 2013, 11:55:33 PM

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Upon Infinity

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One of the backgrounds for my project.  Needs a little something in the foreground.  Comments and suggestions welcome.

yossam

That is great............the only thing I see would be some color variation in your grass.

choronr

This is very good. Look forward to your future iterations of this.

kaedorg

Very nice. Excellent composition.

Which grass did you use for the foreground ?

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archonforest

now this picture is very nice! well done man! Awesome atmo.
maybe some rocks to the front?
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masonspappy

Maybe add (just a few) different, or different size grasses/weeds in the foreground.  Grass looks nice but seems too evenly distributed.
I sort of hesitated to make any suggestion because the image is well done - I like it.

cyphyr

Beautifully done.
I love the mid-ground, the smokey fog amongst the trees.
My pennyworth, Maybe a little titivation in the foreground grass, add a fallen branch or some rocks, just something to break in up a little, or maybe make the grass size a little smaller.
One thing I would change is the aspect ratio. Try 1.778 or even 2. See how it looks :)
Great work
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Upon Infinity

Quote from: kaedorg on November 06, 2013, 01:54:44 AM
Very nice. Excellent composition.

Which grass did you use for the foreground ?

This is just the standard TG grass.  It looks better in lower resolutions  :o for some reason.  It's also the part of the image I'm least satisfied with.  I might use a dedicated object instead, at least in the immediate foreground.

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Quote from: cyphyr on November 06, 2013, 04:25:16 AM
Beautifully done.
I love the mid-ground, the smokey fog amongst the trees.
My pennyworth, Maybe a little titivation in the foreground grass, add a fallen branch or some rocks, just something to break in up a little, or maybe make the grass size a little smaller.
One thing I would change is the aspect ratio. Try 1.778 or even 2. See how it looks :)
Great work
Richard

Yeah, a branch might spice things up a bit. Perhaps some leaves / rocks, etc.  I have to play with it a bit, and I have dozens of scenes to design, so...  As for the aspect ratio, it is based on the 4:3 ratio of the old TG 2 camera standard, because almost all my scenes are based on the same files I created from the TG2 Technology Preview.    ;D


Cocateho

Awesome!  I with everyone as far as the branches, maybe some variation of the grass... a little oriental gazebo off to the side would be a nice touch  ::)

TheBadger

Very nice. Good job.
I agree a little tweaking here and there may be beneficial. But I don't think you have much left to do. Its a pretty powerful scene.
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