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[cyphyr]

you're never going to finish this image ;-)

lol, I "so" know that one
Richard

[Goms]

[FrankB]

haha, very nice

[MacGyver]

Here we go

[Goms]

ok, satisfied with the snow now. Now i need to make some work on the rocks, some grass is planned and still some trees in the lower parts.
comments and critics welcome!!

[Hetzen]

I quite like the rock as it is, maybe a little sharper in places from freeze thaw. I know you said you're happy with the snow, but could you smooth out the lumps in the distance? I guess if you're putting trees there, then there would be no need.

Beautiful image by the way, love the rock peaks.

[Tangled-Universe]

I like the snow

You might add some bump to the rocks by adding a small scale PF with low displacement factor.
The shading/texturing of the rocks is pretty already.

I wouldn't put grasses in the very near foreground, but perhaps a bit more to the back, blending over in trees.

Another thing you might try to improve is the clouds, because I think they are not up to par with the rest.
Maybe make them follow the terrain on the steep cliff at the back

Martin

[Goms]

The snow in the background will be covered by another layer w/o intersection. U just forgot to activate this layer.
No grass... Maybe. Some bushes w/o leaves would work better I guess.
Regarding the clouds: I gonna have to dig through this great tutorial TU wrote, but as I was about to accomplish this with functions anyway, I will for sure make them follow the terrain!

Thx and best regards,
Goms

(Wrote from my BB, please excuse shortness and potential typos)

[Goms]

trees! (fake stones, i think a little bit over-sized?)
currently doing a testrender with new clouds and a better light setup.

[Hetzen]

Woahwa! I hope you're wearing a parachute. The wide angle is giving me vertigo, especially now the trees give this more scale.

[dhavalmistry]

I think he is going to break his legs

and why are trees on an angle?

[Goms]

the camera is a little bit tilted

[Tangled-Universe]

GREAT improvement!
You might try to make the trees a bit lighter by upping the diffuse colour value in the needle-shader. Increasing the translucency to about 0.7 will also work and don't forget to give it a bit of specularity for extra realism.

Are you going to put clouds back in? In the background for instance?
Lastly the motion blur of course I will help you with that, as promised.

Cheers,
Martin

[MacGyver]

Nice improvements!
From this viewpoint right now it looks to me like the snowboarder is some 30 meters in size... just me or a scaling issue?

[Henry Blewer]

Fantastic. I feel like the snowboarder.